This is my five sentence story about the waytfinder have you heard of the story its a story about small boy he had a big brother and he was the wayfinder there was no food and water manu and his brother die now manu is the wayfinder.
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Friday, April 16, 2021
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What a fantastic 5 sentence story Melinda! I'm really impressed with the capital letters, full stops and the descriptive sentences. I get a really good idea of the story just from these 5 sentences. I wonder if next time you make sure the background isn't too dark and then we can easily read what you have written. Great job Melinda, I can't wait to see what you blog next.
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