Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, March 19, 2021
Me,Me,Me
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3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Melinda, I really enjoyed reading your poem. It made me think about you as I read it. My favourite line is the 'curious, shy, clever' one. What wonderful words to describe yourself. Your DLO is very eye-catching and I am wondering if next time you wrote a poem about yourself you would add some sort of photo or image to add to the text.
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